Continuing along the theme of Unnecessary UST from last week, today's I unearthed this forgotten scene from Best Kept Secret.
Basically, the section where Butch starts having dreams about Buttercup used to be longer because at the time I was writing it I had not yet developed that editorial eye that tells you "Hey, maybe pump the brakes on this shit." Thankfully, that so called eye had at least matured enough by the time I actually posted the fic, and while I'm never going to be truly happy with BKS (it's Greens of a bygone era; I can't even fathom writing them this way now), I'm grateful that I could make it just a tiny bit better by axing this.
( Here it is, in all its glory. )
Basically, the section where Butch starts having dreams about Buttercup used to be longer because at the time I was writing it I had not yet developed that editorial eye that tells you "Hey, maybe pump the brakes on this shit." Thankfully, that so called eye had at least matured enough by the time I actually posted the fic, and while I'm never going to be truly happy with BKS (it's Greens of a bygone era; I can't even fathom writing them this way now), I'm grateful that I could make it just a tiny bit better by axing this.
( Here it is, in all its glory. )