I can't believe you wrote a pairing that didn't involve the Girls! What a treat! :)

As always, your attention to detail makes the story. I especially love the lines about Sedusa's hair curling against her scalp and "behaving itself," almost as though it's a third character. You have yet again succeeding in making a character I normally cringe away from tolerable, even endearing (really, canon!Sedusa gives me the squicks).