That was great, true genius. And to comment on what you said about Raven not being able to express her emotions. That is true, but it's become a rather popular idea that if she was to fall in love she would be able too. This comes from the whole Malchoir incident (Episode Spellbound with the purple dragon and her cloak going white.). Now there are two ideas following this, idea one is that Malchoir taught her some tricks using black magic that allowed her to contol her powers and purify her soul. And idea two (and the most prefered) is that she fell in love with him and her love (purple cloaked Raven in her mirror) overid her confinement to her powers and purified her sould giving her the ability to control her powers.

Anyway, sorry bout the rambling. Just thought you might like to know.

Anyway, excellent story.