Okay, so I have to first mention how this particular line just made me lose it:
“I love you, too,” he says desperately, because it’s the truth and he needs her to believe it or else, or else.
Because it just makes my heart do those paranormal leapy, twisty things. And that's just my favorite. :)
And, oh!, the sequencing. I love how this goes from the end to the beginning; totally backwards but possibly even more heartwrenching than if it were forwards.
You make me smile so big my face hurts. (And it has nothing to do with the cold weather and the fact that it's drying up my face and arms and everything.)
And I really do hope to see more of this because it just makes me a better person in general. :)
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“I love you, too,” he says desperately, because it’s the truth and he needs her to believe it or else, or else.
Because it just makes my heart do those paranormal leapy, twisty things. And that's just my favorite. :)
And, oh!, the sequencing. I love how this goes from the end to the beginning; totally backwards but possibly even more heartwrenching than if it were forwards.
You make me smile so big my face hurts. (And it has nothing to do with the cold weather and the fact that it's drying up my face and arms and everything.)
And I really do hope to see more of this because it just makes me a better person in general. :)