ext_64799 ([identity profile] dee-lirious.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] essbeejay 2007-08-10 05:45 pm (UTC)

OH. DEAR. GOD. *faints several times in succession*

I love this! Definitely loving the fairytale take on it (especially since it's the greens and they are possibly the least fairytale-like of them all) and definitely loving the last paragraph;

All they could later recall was the brilliance of the other’s eyes, and the way Buttercup’s hands had shifted against Butch’s chest, slightly, uneasily, as his heartbeat thundered into irregularity.

which is just LOVE on a stick. Fried with MORE LOVE. (Yes, I've completely lost my grip on normal words and analogies, so that's the best I got right now.)

Very, very lovely, and this is, without a doubt, one of my favorite presents today! :D Thank you so much!

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