This isn't terrible.

You can see with my older stuff that the Greens are always better depicted, probably because I've been writing them the longest and have worked out most of their kinks by this point.

I wrote this back in 2006 and had indeed planned on posting it - again, a case where I sent it off to beta and everything - but it needed some work done and I put it off and then it was just... eh. I guess I stopped caring about it.

Reading it over, though, I don't hate it. As I recall, I had come off of writing/posting Swordplay, and wanted to do two things: 1) show them maybe kinda actually working out, and 2) a tasteful sex fic.

I cringe at some points, but they're few and far between. It's really not that bad - actually, it's probably my best TFR post yet - but it does need work that I'm not willing to put into it at this point.

Not going to f-lock this, because it's not really graphic, but I would say it's a hard R.

( The title would've been Mistake. )